Here's my development of the story. I have made the statues more detailed with line work. As well as this I have also made sure the audience clearly look interested towards both statues. As you can see below the completed image there is the different colours divided ready for the screen printing. I have decided that the orange, black and green will be ink instead of paper. But the people will be laser cut.
Heres the next segment of the story. As you can the audience are blocking out the statues and I am not sure whether this looks too messy.
In this image, the crowd isn't distracting. It is clear what they are representing.
The crowd in this segment do look like they are blocking the view of the statues, so when I further develop this I will bring the statues higher up.
The people look fine in this segment however, for continuity I will have to move the statues up as well.
Again, this segment looks fine. But to solve the problem for a few I will have to change all of them. Overall I think the green with the orange nose looks effective.
I like this one. However, there might be too many people on the side of the marble statue.
I think the amount of people on this page could also be a few less. I want the end to look more exciting, so if there's a lot of people on the second to last illustration, the last page could lose its impact.
I like how this one has turned out, however the spacing looks a bit off in some areas so I could either add more people or less to improve it.
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